motivation letters for scholarships
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This is a small fragment of my motivation letter for a scholarship. The text should be clearer and more consistent and concise. Please correct and reword you feel necessary. Some words are repeated twice (asterisks) and do not know how replaced. Thank you very much! Your support is very important to me! His point is good. If I understand correctly, you want to substitute different words for words in asterisks. Well, the second "many" could be "" number, and the interest of the "second" could be the "desire." You have developed an intense desire to study. You might also brings out "further" because it makes the phrase a little too neat. Another thing you could do is change the second sentence "It has made a great contribution to the rest of the world of art construction to be the inspiration for many important architectural styles. . . And so on. Field could be changed in this field. And apart that, this paragraph sounds literate and intelligent, and I hope he gets what he wants. Good luck! Business & Quality Prose Related posts:
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